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Major-Microbiology

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Set up Apparatus
Global Warming
Electricity(warning:cute)
About Birds
How Stuff Works


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Miss Ng's Sofa
Sci Tr's Bookshelf
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READ or PLAY
World Capitals Quiz World Flags Quiz Leonardo Da Vinci
Earth Quiz
Global Warming(TIMEMag)
Recycle Dash(Warning:Silly)
Burger 2 go


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*Class Activities*
-Speedy Dictionary Skills-
-Henna!-
-Willy Wonka Scriptplay-
-Dry the clothes!-


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Xingnan Primary


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Thursday, October 1, 2009
Writing Tips 1
Here are some ways you can power-up your stories with super introductions!
Dialogue - E.g. "Pa, can I go to Jason's house?Please?" Keane begged.
Sound - Add feelings and sounds E.g. Plink! The precious ring bounced off the steps as it rolled further and further away.
Action - Describe exciting events E.g. I jumped out of bed, hopped into my uniform and grabbed my bag. With no time to lose, I got on the bus and was on my way to school! "I'm going to be so late!"

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